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Title: Am I right
Post by: thetworegs on June 08, 2017, 11:57:20 AM
I was playing around with different drum beats and this one came up...Thanks for listening
Twisted love
Twisted life
Twisted love
Twisted life

i got the feeling baby that you don't love me lady
 i got the feeling baby that you don't want me baby
Am i right
Am i right

i got the feeling baby that you don't want me baby
i got the feeling baby that you don't love me lady
Am i right
Am i right

This love i feel feels so wrong
This love i feel is getting old

i got the feeling baby that you don't want me baby
i got the feeling baby that you don't want to touch me baby
Am i right
Am i right

i got the feeling baby that you want to lose me baby
i got the feeling baby that you want to lose me
Am i right
Am i right

Am i right

(Break)

i'm twisted up inside baby you have burned me lady
i can take no more lady with what your doing it's not right
It's not right
It's not alright

i got the feeling baby that you don't want me baby
i got the feeling you want me out of sight, it's not right
It's not right
It's not right

Am i right
Am i right

i got the feeling baby that you don't want me baby
that you want me out of here so you don't have to look at me
Am i right
Am i right
Am i right

am i running, am i running, am i running
It just ain't right
Music & lyrics Reg
Title: Re: Its just not right
Post by: Redler on June 08, 2017, 08:51:53 PM
Great backer and your voice fits like a glove on it!! Nice crunchy guitars!

Your song ends suddenly at 3:54...
Title: Re: Its just not right
Post by: Groundy on June 08, 2017, 10:22:43 PM
I enjoyed this one Trev, really well done,
As kari said, it has a sudden end at 3.54,


Alex
Title: Re: Am I right
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on June 11, 2017, 12:52:43 PM
Like this a lot, I had a moment of sympathy for your speakers but I soon got over it. Spot on   Willie
Title: Re: Am I right
Post by: Johnny Robbo on June 12, 2017, 12:49:58 AM
This sounds "dangerous" ... a real menacing vibe to the whole thing! Superb work, Trev!
Title: Re: Am I right
Post by: Groundy on June 30, 2017, 12:29:11 PM
Back for another listen.......

Alex