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Title: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: A K on January 03, 2015, 02:35:50 PM
I have a big favour to ask.
This is the song that Robbie never got to record.

As a tribute to Robbie, I was wondering if members could provide vocals (the more the merrier).
There are vocal sections and an outro.
It would be good if contributors to vocal sections could sing (merged together) on the outro, to form a grand finale.

I have attached the lyrics, and on the second page (for guidance) how the lyrics are phrased with the original guitar music that I gave Robbie.
In some places the lyrics commence prior to the chord changes, and in other places the lyrics commence a beat after the change.
Verse 5 has the possibility of a 2 part harmony.
As a kind hint, the Bridge sections require husky voices.  :)

I am new to this collaboration process, so please feel free to assist.

I would like to have your tribute song played at Robbie's funeral, so we have just over a week to complete it.

Many thanks.
Kelvin (aka A.K.)
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Groundy on January 04, 2015, 01:53:44 AM
A good Idea Kelvin, such a nice song and wonderful lyrics........Alex
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: T.C. Elliott on January 04, 2015, 07:39:08 AM
I think this is a great idea for a tribute from this community.

Would it be possible to have a version with a vocal guide track that we could sing along to? I just sang what I thought would work really well with the bridge 1 and 2 but I have no idea if I'm hitting the correct melody. (or if there IS a correct melody.)  Are you wanting different people to take different parts and then everyone to sing the outro?


Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: A K on January 04, 2015, 03:27:32 PM
How the song is partitioned is heavily dependent on the number of response that I receive.

My original hope was that everyone would feature in several lines, plus the outro.

If people can sing the entire song, and I will mix the song to highlight each singer separately throughout the song, as well as blend their voices together for harmonies and the outro.

The best guide I have to date is page 2 of the Lyric attachment. It is the original song write-up I gave to Robbie, where the chords are positioned relatively accurately over the words.

I will see what I can do about providing a guide vocal. Will keep you posted but it may take a day or so to find/record a singer.

Many thanks.
Kelvin
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Hilary on January 04, 2015, 04:38:37 PM
Everyone could record the vox for whole song and Kelvin could pick the bits out he wants and put it together.
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: T.C. Elliott on January 04, 2015, 07:22:29 PM
If you don't mind separate melody lines we can go with what we hear in our head. Which sounds like you figured would work.  Really the question is this: Is the melody I come up with okay? If so then I'll give it a go asap.
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Hilary on January 05, 2015, 05:34:17 AM
I've had a go at doing a guide track on the piano - thought it would be less intrusive than vocals. I appreciate it might not work as I'm female (no way!) but thought it worth a try!

Kept the melody and phrasing very simple to make it easier to synch. The vocal guide starts at around 0:33 and I've included both parts in Verse 5.

Let me know if it's acceptable or if you'd like any changes and I'll record my part.

Thanks very much for doing this Kelvin, it's a wonderful gesture for a wonderful man xx
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Jarle on January 05, 2015, 12:14:12 PM
I would love to hear you sing this Hilary.
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Hilary on January 05, 2015, 12:33:07 PM
Quote from: Jarle on January 05, 2015, 12:14:12 PMI would love to hear you sing this Hilary.

I will do Jarle - it's meant to be a vocal guide to help everyone else sing it (in synch) - it's not an instrumental!
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: IanR on January 06, 2015, 05:10:38 AM
I have done a vocal using Kenny's version as a guide.

I have posted the mixed version here and my vocal as a separate file (in my next post).  It can be imported into a DAW and edited in there.

I know that Geir has also done a version and Hilary may be working on a vocal, so, depending on which version we use as the base version, I'm happy to do this again.

cheers,

Ian
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: IanR on January 06, 2015, 05:14:32 AM
AK,

Here is my vocal on its own.

You can do anything you like with it.

Ian

Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Groundy on January 06, 2015, 05:54:04 AM
Nicely done Ian............Alex
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Geir on January 06, 2015, 07:03:44 AM
Stunning version Ian !! A very fitting tribute !
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Hilary on January 06, 2015, 08:19:26 AM
Hi Kelvin - here's a mock up of my version . . .
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Hilary on January 06, 2015, 08:25:07 AM
here's the vocal . . .
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Groundy on January 06, 2015, 09:05:09 AM
Brilliant Hilary........Alex
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Jarle on January 06, 2015, 11:31:22 AM
Two beautiful versions Ian and Hilary.
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: A K on January 06, 2015, 02:39:15 PM
I have only just now listen to Hilary's and IanR's posts.
I feel such a fool for not looking at the Collabs pages (I will learn my way around this site).

Sweet Hilary, with her piano and vocals.
Such a joy to listen to.

And IanR has blended his voice beautifully with Kenny's.
I am getting that "community feeling" bursting through.
After all, that what's songcrafters is all about - people enjoying and sharing music.

My deepest gratitude to all.
Kelvin
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Geir on January 06, 2015, 02:56:11 PM
Wonderful Haylie!

And the lyrics still gets me ..... I can almost hear Robert sing them himself .....
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: kenny mac on January 06, 2015, 06:14:25 PM
Well done Ian and Hilary ,it's great to hear all the versions coming in.
Rob would be proud.
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: steelguitar on January 07, 2015, 06:12:06 AM
Brilliant version Hilary,
as said, Rob would be proud of your version!

Jean-Sébastien
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Geir on January 07, 2015, 07:04:23 AM
Here are just the vocal track for the version I posted here (https://songcrafters.org/forum/index.php?topic=22480.0)
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: Redler on January 07, 2015, 09:40:49 AM
Really beautiful versions Ian and Hilary! Lovely tribute!
Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: T.C. Elliott on January 07, 2015, 08:14:12 PM
Here's my go at a vocal mixed in with the backer:

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Title: Re: Song for Facemask - Down on my Luck
Post by: T.C. Elliott on January 07, 2015, 08:16:10 PM
kVocal by itself:

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You can right click and save as or just save in most browsers. I'll put the link by itself right here:

http://www.helenseviltwin.com/tcelliott/Songcrafters/DOML_TCVox.mp3