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Title: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: Hook on September 29, 2014, 06:05:22 AM
Wrote & recorded this last week. Live take,lead & thumbjam bass were done in the car; drums are my kit at home. I used 2 tracks for the bass so I could use different scales for the verse & chorus.
1 uke/vocal (stereo)
1 drums (stereo)
1 lead uke
2 bass (TJ)
Everything Goes Dark
written & performed by Hook
It's a plague
wrapping itself around your leg
Can it be contained

Do we see
The devil breaking down you and me
Is this the way that it's supposed to be

Day turns tonight
Light turns to dark
Wrong turns to write
Our flame is just a spark
When all is lost
& Everything goes dark

It's a plague
It's wrapping itself around your waist
I haven't heard of anyone who survived

Do you feel
The Devils breath on the back of your neck
& on the bottom of your feet
Like me

It's a plague
And it's wrapping itself around your head
I wonder if you can even hear me


Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: bruno on September 29, 2014, 03:02:11 PM
Bro - this track has some wonderful lines in this - with the every creeping devil. Two TJ tracks for the key change seems mighty complex, so well done for pulling it off. The Uke has a wonderful clear sound to it. Lovely track bro.
B
Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: fenderbender on September 29, 2014, 04:14:57 PM
Super
anything you do Hook has that touch of class
this one just grows on you

congrats

Tommy
Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: Redler on September 29, 2014, 11:46:59 PM
Hookastic stuff on its best!! Love the jazzy vibe, here...does it come from your drumming and bass? Anyway, the bass sounds to very upright one...

Loved it!!
Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on October 01, 2014, 03:48:21 AM
Excellent tune and played to perfection. Willie
Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: Jarle on October 02, 2014, 09:58:54 AM
Really great song Hook. Cool drumming.
Title: Re: "Everything Goes Dark" a Hook original
Post by: Nelson on October 07, 2014, 04:22:21 PM
Hook, U R just 2 cool.  8)
Dig them vocals and the bridge / music break.

SWEEEEEET
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