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Title: Got To Make You Mine
Post by: Lounging McCoy on May 22, 2013, 07:58:53 AM

I recently became interested in blues music, and this is my first crack at doing a blues song. I had a blast with this one and more blues is on the way.

Got To Make You Mine
by On The Trolley

Darlin' I've loved you
For such a long, long time
Can't keep my head straight
Can't wait for the sun to shine
Maybe I'm dreamin'
I should be schemin'
How to make you mine

Porcelain skin
A pony tail
The scent of your perfume
Causes my heart to fail
I want you to see
Please notice me
Got to make you mine

Darlin' I love you
Got to let you know
I'll take you in my arms baby
And never let you go
What do you say?
I'll love you 'til my dyin' day
Got to make you mine

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Title: Re: Got To Make You Mine
Post by: andy casson on May 23, 2013, 12:25:42 AM

nicely done fella, heartfelt vocal, keep em comin'

andy

Title: Re: Got To Make You Mine
Post by: SwanSong on May 25, 2013, 03:53:08 PM

HI there really nice attempt and very creative
smooth vocal.s and well composed keep sharing
wish u the best NEIL

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