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Title: 'London Town' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Greeny on January 21, 2013, 06:46:45 AM
Hofner Verithin & Precision Bass, plus some Thumbjammery. All MBR.

An important feature of this song was trying to shoehorn the Big Ben chimes into the melody with a Thumbjam dulcimer. Not quite as easy as you'd think!

p.s. I love the 70's Wings song of the same name, but this is nothing like that  :D

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Post by: Redler on January 21, 2013, 07:01:27 AM
Brilliant Brit pop tune, again... Wanna get in London, now!! :)

Kari
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 21, 2013, 07:02:39 AM
braw tell yer maw.
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Post by: Tangled Wires on January 21, 2013, 07:09:34 AM
You always seem to squeeze so much into your songs, its hard to believe that this one clocks in at just over 3 minutes, it seemed to last much longer.

I have given this three listens now and its a superb piece of work, those chimes fit in seemlessly but can appreciate how difficult that must have been. Nice touch kicking off with the chorus too, and there is such a nice contrast and flow between verses and choruses.

Loving them lyrics too reflecting the drudgery of the commuting and working life
Title: Re: 'London Town' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Greeny on January 21, 2013, 07:15:54 AM
Quote from: Tangled Wires on January 21, 2013, 07:09:34 AMNice touch kicking off with the chorus too

Thanks! I'm trying to emulate the way Burt Baccarach & Hal David go straight in with the chorus (and often song title) on a lot of their work... Raindrops keep falling on my head, Do you know the way to San Jose, What the world needs now etc etc. Straight in, no messing!
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Post by: Geir on January 21, 2013, 07:37:00 AM
HOW DO YOU DO IT ??? ???

Yet another Greeny masterpiece.

I'll be humming this all day !

Quote from: Greeny on January 21, 2013, 07:15:54 AM
Quote from: Tangled Wires on January 21, 2013, 07:09:34 AMNice touch kicking off with the chorus too

Thanks! I'm trying to emulate the way Burt Baccarach & Hal David go straight in with the chorus (and often song title) on a lot of their work... Raindrops keep falling on my head, Do you know the way to San Jose, What the world needs now etc etc. Straight in, no messing!
It's something the Beatles did quite a bit too. A good recipe for a hit ..... if you've got a strong chorus .....
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Post by: Flash Harry on January 21, 2013, 01:56:25 PM
Splendid stuff!

I'm with Geir on this one.
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Post by: bruno on January 21, 2013, 02:00:56 PM
This one has a great swagger about it, great song.
Lovely lush recording, really strong sounds.
B
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Post by: Gritter on January 21, 2013, 02:03:17 PM
So colourful and tasty. A real feast for the ears!
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Post by: Jarle on January 21, 2013, 02:41:01 PM
I agree this is nothing like the Wings song, but it has something of a McCartney feel to it.
Which is a good thing.

JOA
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Post by: Hook on January 21, 2013, 02:48:34 PM
Quote from: Gritter on January 21, 2013, 02:03:17 PMSo colourful and tasty. A real feast for the ears!
My thoughts exactly, excellent tune!
Rock on!
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Post by: hooper on January 21, 2013, 05:53:18 PM
Love the well-crafted melody and chord changes.  Lots of really nice guitar work here too.   Has got Greeny all over it!   
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on January 21, 2013, 06:08:44 PM
A real Fab song and up there with the best Tim! Keep putting them out just like this. Starting with the chorus works very well. It got my attention right off the bat. Nice work!

Farrell
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Post by: Gnasty on January 21, 2013, 09:13:23 PM


An all around top notch million dollar song as always. Those rhythm guitars are it for me. Very beautiful playing.

Yes not easy doing the TJ sometimes. I curse real bad with it sometimes but i always do at recording time.

Awesome song!
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Post by: Nelson on January 23, 2013, 10:43:09 AM
I love the idea of mixing up the song structures.
This one seems to have worked perfectly here.

I too loved the lyrical depiction of the drudgery of the commuting and working life.

So, that bell was a pain in the ass to get right, huh? Nicely done.

Another brilliant creation, with that MR. Green swing to it.


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Post by: thetworegs on January 23, 2013, 02:13:49 PM
Absolutly blinding....your the governor Mr. Green....
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Post by: Grahamsway on January 23, 2013, 02:38:16 PM
This is an excellent track, great mix too. The vocals and harmonies are as good as it gets and oh yes love the guitar
work.
Well done Graham
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Post by: Facemask93 on January 23, 2013, 03:13:37 PM
Really great melody , well structured & perfectly executed , well done Tim
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Post by: cuthbert on January 23, 2013, 04:17:37 PM
I'm getting to this one late...  ::)  And it's another Greeny goody, no matter what the day.  :)  I dig the Big Ben chimes you added with TJ dulcimer - nice touch!.
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Post by: daveyboy on January 24, 2013, 03:35:45 AM
Woah...this is good!!!!
Such a polished and professional sound, that it is hard to believe that it is recorded on a small multi-track recorder.
Those guitars are so lush sounding, and the whole song just oozes quality and class.
Really well done, this was a great listen.
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Post by: chapperz66 on January 26, 2013, 03:36:35 AM
Wonderful stuff.
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Post by: 64Guitars on January 27, 2013, 04:51:01 PM
What a great song. I love the catchy chorus with its rich vocal harmonies. Some really nice guitar ideas too. Brilliant.

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Post by: kenny mac on January 27, 2013, 07:30:48 PM
Well done greeny,a well structured,well performed song,Always love that sound you get from the guitars.
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Post by: Groundy on July 01, 2017, 11:31:04 PM
One from The Random Dozen,
Brilliant Tim, missed this one first time around.....

Alex