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Title: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Hook on August 19, 2011, 11:08:42 PM
Something to rock on!
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Post by: Geir on August 20, 2011, 03:08:59 AM
Fabolous song Hook !!!

A summer hit in my book !

---> πPod
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on August 20, 2011, 03:33:15 AM
Wow Hook... this is very very very taystay. Love your style. Love the lyric... Love the whole damn thang!!!! Rock on bro.
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: chapperz66 on August 21, 2011, 04:44:08 AM
Another great song Hook.  Superb stuff.

Paul
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: SwanSong on August 21, 2011, 11:07:37 AM
ONE WORD DESCRIBES THIS SONG SSSSSSSSSSSSSUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR!!
BEST REGARDS NEIL .!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Bluesberry on August 21, 2011, 11:11:27 AM
Yes sir, thats a sweet song.  Great vocals man, real nice and clear and right in the sweet spot.  I like your style Hook.
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Post by: Krasi on August 21, 2011, 02:07:26 PM
Wow, wow,wow...
What a great track.
And what an outstanding vocal!!!

Thanks!!!
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on August 21, 2011, 02:54:56 PM
nice one like a smiths, birds and cracker smoothie yummy
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Post by: Farrell Jackson on August 23, 2011, 12:35:34 PM
An instant hit....or it should be! If you had a 12 string Ric in there filling and soloing I would swear it was the Byrds. I also hear a little Outlaws. This is some great writing and an excellent sounding song Hook!

Farrell
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Ferryman on August 23, 2011, 04:21:10 PM
Superb songwriting here and a very powerful vocal performance. I love the intro and the way it builds when when you bring the simple lead solo in. The lyrics work so well with the chord changes, the "speaking in fragments" part is a great hook that really sticks in the mind the first time you hear it. This could be a massive hit.

My only tweak would be to double the rhythm guitars so you have a wider stereo image, this would a bit more depth, but that's a minor thing. Brilliant stuff indeed!

Cheers,

Nigel 
Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Flash Harry on August 23, 2011, 04:24:33 PM
Wow!  This is very good stuff! It's an all round great song.

Title: Re: "Cotton Mouth"
Post by: Hook on August 23, 2011, 09:26:08 PM
Incredibly kind comments, Thank you for listening and I'm glad you liked it. I sure would love a 12 string ric but all my guitars are done on a Dean acoustic!
Rock on!