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Title: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Greeny on March 21, 2011, 02:40:43 AM
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Inspired by the (brilliant) John Fante novel 'The Brotherhood of the Grape'. Fante is a great writer, and anyone who likes / gets Bukowski will go for him in a big way. As Buk himself said: 'Fante is my God'.

Quite a simple & unassuming song really. Just an ode to drinking with a bit of harmony. All done on the MBR with 12 & 6 string acoustics, telecaster and bass.

Cheers!  :D

(http://www.ocica.org/images/the_brotherhood_of_the_grape.jpg)

Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Oldrottenhead on March 21, 2011, 02:51:18 AM
a monday and a drop of the green stuff, lovely harmonies on this one tim, i love Bukowski so i must have a look at this guy.

braw tell yer maw.
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Greeny on March 21, 2011, 02:57:40 AM
Quote from: oldrottenhead on March 21, 2011, 02:51:18 AMa monday and a drop of the green stuff, lovely harmonies on this one tim, i love Bukowski so i must have a look at this guy.

braw tell yer maw.

Cheers big fella. Start with his book 'Ask the Dust'... you won't be disappointed!
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: thetworegs on March 21, 2011, 03:33:38 AM
Brilliant lyrics....love the vocal and the harmonies ....great song for Monday the sunny day in spring
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Geir on March 21, 2011, 03:57:57 AM
ahhh yes .... Green monday !!

This is brilliant !!

This is just what I needed on a sober week :D
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: henwrench on March 21, 2011, 04:08:37 AM
Quite simply, another belter that contains all the right ingredients to make a Greeny classic. Bang on.

                                                                       henwrench
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: dasilvasings on March 21, 2011, 08:51:50 AM
Very nice song!

Thumbs up for the vocal harmonies!!!!
Thumbs up for the vocal harmonies!!!!
Thumbs up for the vocal harmonies!!!!

Hey! Did I already mentioned thumbs up for vocal harmonies?!?!

But what i really dig is the bass part! Yor bass parts are always melodic gems! Pleasure!
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Gnasty on March 21, 2011, 05:01:53 PM


Sounds like pure Green Grapes...Those harmonies are off the map!...Mondays suck but Greeny Mondays Rule!!
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Gritter on March 21, 2011, 05:03:54 PM
That's a good one I'd say. Really stellar job on the vox.
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: fenderbender on March 21, 2011, 05:19:43 PM
top class
ohhh sxxxittt the harmonies are just so perfect
top shelf
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: launched on March 21, 2011, 07:31:20 PM
Man that's delicious guitar, always love your killer melodic bass melodies and those harmonies are just badass!!!

Wow, I love it! And, yep, you're going to get it:

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!! ;D

You rule, bro!

Mark
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Greeny on March 22, 2011, 04:06:31 AM
Thanks everyone. On reflection, I'm not at all happy with this. Halfway through re-writing and recording a new version, lol.
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: cuthbert on March 22, 2011, 02:37:04 PM
Another big Hank Chinaski fan here...I'll have to check out this Fante feller...  ;)

This sounds like a Greeny classic to me - love all the guitars you always seem to get into a song without ever sounding crowded. Your vocals are sublime - great harmonies!
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Bluesberry on March 22, 2011, 03:02:17 PM
It sounds fab to me ....I can't wait for version 2.....I really like this one.  Why not post the second one up beside the first for fun.
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: OsCKilO on March 22, 2011, 03:19:00 PM
I hope you keep this version as wel Tim!

I Bloody Love it!

This is one of those songs that will find it's way onto the BBQ playlists for many a person!



SUPERB AND BLOODY AWESOME!
Title: Re: 'Brotherhood of the Grape' - Greeny Original
Post by: Nelson on March 22, 2011, 04:57:36 PM
Oh Yeah, Greeny,
Man those guitars sound so sweet.
The harmonies through out are perfectly harmonious.  ;D ;D ;D

Tharek is right about the BBQ playlist.
I hear it as the sun's going down but party is just really getting  started.
Nice groove on that bass, also.