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Title: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Facemask93 on October 15, 2010, 01:57:24 PM
Could i get some feedback on this mix just so i can see where i'm going with this

Tony Jones kindly did some additional Synth , Tubular bells and Jackson with sustainiac

Cans recommended

Rob


Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Satchwood on October 15, 2010, 02:14:21 PM
Wow ,.,  this sounds great Rob and TJ!!  Great lyrics as well FF!!   Very pro-sounding recording!
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Gnasty on October 15, 2010, 02:50:23 PM
I love the keyboard addition by Tony and they are perfect, although i have to say i don't like how it's mixed.

It could be my monitors but I think your vox should dominate all the tracks in the song. It's kinda taken away from the song IMO. I'll have to listen again on my stereo cranked.

Hearing your tremendous vocals is more than important

Nigel can fix that though. Still awesome as hell Rob, and great job Tony!

Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Vanncad on October 15, 2010, 02:59:06 PM
Hey Rob - this tune sounds about as pro as you can get.I think the mix is "the Mutts Nuts" as you guys say.

Your voice rules man! It's very clean and cuts through pretty damn good to me.
That keyboard is wicked too! Fatter than my prom date.

I can't believe the stuff you guys are putting out for this album. You can take this one to the bank!!
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Ted on October 15, 2010, 03:47:12 PM
I love the rich background textures, not to subtle, not to prominent.

Has anyone mentioned early King Crimson or ELP?  I can't say that this song sounds much like either band, but the dark delivery of this song evokes the same feelings.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Bluesberry on October 15, 2010, 03:49:21 PM
I think it sounds wicked, deadly and fantastic.  Sounds just about perfect to me.  It it were me mixing this I would declare this done.  Fantastic job.  It is very good to hear Tony J got involved, his keys really add a fantastic dimension. 
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Ted on October 15, 2010, 04:05:03 PM
Quote from: Bluesberry on October 15, 2010, 03:49:21 PMIt it were me mixing this I would declare this done.

I second that.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: OsCKilO on October 15, 2010, 04:41:53 PM
I love west end musicals.....

I must say.... This actually sounds like it is from a Musical....



T.J...  Rob...


Andrew Lloyd Webber should be shitting in his Pants!

Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: FuzzFace on October 15, 2010, 04:49:47 PM
It took me a while to come around to this, but I like this a lot.
The first version now seems bare.

I wasn't used to the bells and choir so it was distracting.  However it is really professionally done and really well mixed.

It's grown on me.

And it does sound a lot like a musical... which is perfect!

Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Kenneth on October 15, 2010, 08:54:24 PM
Top notch music Rob. Sounds good with the phones on, I'd say you've achieved 10/10 on all levels. PRO.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: launched on October 15, 2010, 09:22:02 PM
I'm on headphones with this and I think it sounds perfect. I've listened to it a million times, can't get enough of it. A very moving number.

I also will take back what I said about the single picked guitar sounding a little low in the mix, because it sounds perfect now.

And, I can't get enough of the vocals. Solid gold, hands down.

Beautiful song, my friend - And everyone did a fantastic job. Well done!

Mark
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Tony W on October 15, 2010, 09:32:21 PM
It's posts like this that make me think. The world would be a better place if Rob was a household name. You are one hell of a vocalist my friend.

This is an outstanding piece of music, no matter how you slice it. TJ's additions were fantastic, but the volume swells are what gave this piece an added dimension. Beautiful.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Redler on October 16, 2010, 12:04:05 AM
Great additions! Love the dramatical mood on this! Superb performing...

Kari
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: stoman on October 16, 2010, 01:22:25 AM
I like the additional parts too. I'm only listening on my PC speakers now, so I'd better not say anything about the mix yet except that it seems to translate well on these cheap speakers. The string pad may need a high shelf/high pass filter around 200 Hz, but these speakers always make muddy sounds, so don't take this for granted.

I'll listen again on my MP3 player later today. This song is for my archive anyway. :)

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: stoman on October 16, 2010, 03:33:52 PM
I'm in bed now and listening again. The mix sounds perfect with headphones. And what a great song this is, I must repeat myself. I will listen to this masterpiece A LOT of times more.

Thanks for giving away this gem!

Regards,
  Steffen
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: FuzzFace on October 16, 2010, 03:35:24 PM
QuoteThanks for giving away this gem!

I second that.
It is a gem, for sure.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Gritter on October 16, 2010, 06:55:50 PM
sounds soooo gooood!
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Bluesberry on November 15, 2010, 05:17:19 PM
Quality song for sure...quality
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Oldrottenhead on April 06, 2011, 05:52:38 PM
i cannot believe i didnt comment on this especially as guernica is probably my favourite painting, that piano goes deep like a bomb in ma heid boooooooooooooooom
magic
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Gritter on April 07, 2011, 01:28:34 PM
Pure quality. What a sound! What a performance!! What a song!!! It just doesn't get any better.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: FuzzFace on April 07, 2011, 01:35:47 PM
Quote from: Gritter on April 07, 2011, 01:28:34 PMPure quality. What a sound! What a performance!! What a song!!! It just doesn't get any better.

I absolutely second, third and fourth that.

This number is legit to the umpteenth degree.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Rata-tat-tat on April 07, 2011, 06:13:48 PM
Agreed with all that has been said. Can't add anything, but awesome.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Ferryman on April 11, 2011, 04:46:03 AM
I realise (to paraphrase someone) that I've been a very naughty boy. I was listening to the whole Picasso project yesterday and I realised there are some tracks I haven't commented on. And this is one, I need to be severely punished as it's effing brilliant and really needs to get some more comments.

Overall, it's the combination of vox and arrangment that really make this a standout track for me. Such a clever combination of instruments to make a deep and multi-faceted soundscape on top of which you have those wonderful vocals. Your vocal performance on this is superb, so many great nuances that bring out the power of the lyrics so well. The combination of guitars and keys is sublime.

I think the mix is fantastic as well. It sounds great on phones but it also sounds superb on my studio monitors, so well done there! You have a great balance of sounds across the tonal range and the vox are mixed perfectly for me - they cut through clearly without overpowering the mix. 

Absolutely wonderful Rob and TJ, a really high quality piece of work. And a very beautiful piece of music as well.

Cheers,

Nigel
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: T.C. Elliott on December 16, 2014, 08:07:02 PM
Listening through today and I wanna say that I really enjoyed listening to this one. The vocals are nearly perfect. A very good song in the project.
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Geir on December 18, 2014, 02:59:50 AM
Great bump !!!

A gem for sure !!!

What a voice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Satchwood on December 19, 2014, 02:03:57 PM
Thanks for this bump!   Sounds so good in my head... really pro and beautiful recording!!
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Mach on October 15, 2016, 08:26:50 AM
Excellent
Title: Re: Picasso Songbook---Guernica 2nd mix additions by Tafka
Post by: Groundy on August 24, 2017, 11:33:51 PM
I found this beautiful piece looking through the site,
From Picasso songbook, Suffering Machines,
What a voice.

Alex