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Title: My Father's Son
Post by: Trist on April 14, 2024, 06:51:18 AM
Hi Here is a new track hopefully it sounds ok
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Post by: Oldrottenhead on April 14, 2024, 09:07:27 AM
Lovely.
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Post by: StephenM on April 14, 2024, 09:50:29 AM
your vocals are must hear for me

but all the rest is just as good! 

keep on keepin on.  it's good to tune in here.
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Post by: Ray Brookes on April 14, 2024, 02:20:59 PM
Great to hear a new track from you, Trist and this one is stellar. Excellent vocal and arranging along with fantastic emotive lyrics. Love the simplistic accompaniment that works so well here. Brilliant songwriting.
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Post by: TPB on April 14, 2024, 04:22:27 PM
Excellent on all points loving the vocal
Tim
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Post by: Mike_S on April 14, 2024, 04:29:08 PM
Lovely Trist, great song. Nice simple backing highlights that great vocal.

Mike
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Post by: DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee on April 15, 2024, 04:11:25 AM
No mistaking that voice, nice to hear a new one of your songs Trist. This has a lovely gentle peaceful sound throughout, the minimal backing fits great with your vocals. Brilliant lyrics too.
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Post by: Greeny on April 15, 2024, 04:12:29 AM
Sounds more than 'ok'! A really lovely arrangement. It's incredibly full and warm for such (apparent) simplicity. You really know what you're doing with this. It's a gorgeous formula with a brilliant performance to match. Superb.
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Post by: thetworegs on April 15, 2024, 04:59:28 AM
What he said ....... Beautifully performed
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Post by: Blooby on April 15, 2024, 07:15:39 AM

Makes me wish I could sing. I am a fan of your voice.

Love the stark beginning, giving way to the strings and drums. One of my favorite songs is called "4th of July" by Daniel Byrnes. I feel this tune could comfortably sit on the same album.

Wonderful post.

Blooby

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Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 15, 2024, 09:44:49 AM
As Greeny mentioned, this is way better than just "OK". Your vocals sound great and so full. The build up and the pull back is the secret ingredient for this mix and production...as is your performances. Well done Trist!
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Post by: chapperz66 on April 15, 2024, 12:58:32 PM
Yes- this is OK. 

No its not.  It is wonderful.  The arrangement is out of this world.  The instrumentation might be minimal but not at all sparse.  And your voice is fantastic..

Paul.
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Post by: Pipes on April 16, 2024, 01:10:08 AM
Simply Beautiful.

Congratulations.

Nick
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Post by: Pru on April 16, 2024, 07:10:26 PM
this song is a real beauty! love it.
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Post by: Ray Brookes on April 16, 2024, 10:55:13 PM
Came back for another listen, mate. Fantastic emotive song.
Title: Re: My Father's Son
Post by: Trist on April 17, 2024, 03:31:07 AM
Thanks Everybody for the comments 8)