Post Your Work => Original Songs => Topic started by: T.C. Elliott on December 03, 2011, 03:54:11 PM
Title: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: T.C. Elliott on December 03, 2011, 03:54:11 PM
I've been wanting to write a yule/holiday song for a few weeks and today this came popping out. Feel free to let me know if it's too... umm overwrought or whatever. And thanks for all the feedback lately. You guys are great.
A Christmas Prayer
Acoustic and Vox: T.C.
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Born on a winter's day But which date she just can't say Always thought she had it rough Now she thinks she's had enough
She's living in her second home She's by herself but never alone She shares a room with two boys They share their food, clothes and toys
Her mother said she'd come back for her some day Soon as she got set up somewhere That girl can only think about her mom tonight As she says her Christmas prayer
There's a girl who is all alone There's a lot of pain in that home They tease her 'cause she's got one hand She wonders why, she can't understand
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: 64Guitars on December 04, 2011, 12:49:00 PM
This is excellent, TC! The verses remind me of Tom Petty a bit. I think this is my favourite song of yours. Well done.
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: Oldrottenhead on December 04, 2011, 12:50:39 PM
love it
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on December 06, 2011, 04:32:07 AM
Hi TC, have to agree with 64, this is possibly the best I've heard you sing and play and a reminder that Christmas can be as stark for some people as sparkling for others. Superb................Willie
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: IanR on December 06, 2011, 04:45:40 AM
beautiful
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: SwanSong on December 07, 2011, 07:41:25 PM
a Super enjoyment loved this great vox. HAPPY Holidays. cheers NEIL . 1
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: SE on December 11, 2011, 04:10:12 PM
This just too good, love,in the vox ,guitar and song ,just come together so well, in fact this is just a good song,thanks for posting, loved it!!
Title: Re: A Christmas Prayer - YuleFest
Post by: Groundy on December 02, 2017, 11:50:14 PM