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#61

Original Songs / Screwed - Jazzshed original fo...

Last post by ODH - May 07, 2024, 03:12:41 AM

Two chords - Am7 and D9 - acoustic guitar, brush drums and double bass and vocals.

Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill
To get a pail of water...
Till Jack fell down
And he broke his crown
And then Jill came tumbling after

They were screwed.

—-

Now Little Bo Peep
She lost her sheep
And didn't know where to find them
So she left them alone
And hoped that they would come home
With so their little tails wagging behind them

But she was screwed

—-

The Incy wincy spider
Was climbing up the spout
Until along came the rain
And washed down the drain
And flushed poor Incy out

He was screwed

—-

Now little miss Muffat
She was sat on a tuffet
Eating her curds and her way
Along came a spider
And sat down beside her
And frightened miss muffat away

She was screwed
And they were all screwed


And what we learn and what they tell
and what we know only too well
Is that life will hold back
and when you think you're on track
It will knock you down
And then, just like Jack
It will break your crown

#62

Original Songs / Re: Positivity-Original

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 03:00:02 AM

I can hear a slight difference in vocal, it sounds really good, but then again it all does!

Great production and interesting song, as always

#63

Original Songs / Re: "Azimuth Z"

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 02:54:46 AM

This is really good, some great guitar tones and enough going on to keep it interesting. Some nice chord changes too

There's a bit about 0:34, a kind of violin sound - is that a guitar and volume pedal? It sounds great!

#64

Original Songs / Re: Nobody Knows

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 02:47:12 AM

Good song, great production and guitar work, excellent vocal!

If I was to be picky I'd say the Crash cymbal seems a bit out of sync near the end... might just be me.

#65

Original Songs / Re: Symphony of Solitude

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 02:39:12 AM

Nice. Would be great if it could be developed into a full song

#66

Original Songs / Re: "Gray Day" w/Lurker

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 02:36:50 AM

Like this, great production, guitar and vocals. Its nicely restrained, you've resisted the tempation to add more and spoil the atmosphere.

Funnily enough I'm currently working on a song called Grey Day! Reckon it'll be a couple of months off completion though...

#67

Original Songs / Re: A Good Guy In The Movies

Last post by karl1171 - May 07, 2024, 02:27:26 AM

There's a lot to like here. For me in particular, the synth and the guitars.

I also like that line about 'all that practicing and tuition', it made me smile - I know what you mean, I don't like doing that much either!

#68

Original Songs / Re: Hideaway (Greco & Green)

Last post by maxit - May 06, 2024, 11:25:37 PM

Great work .. great lyrics and vocals.. also really good guitar playing , I really liked those chords pattern..

glad to share!
3x0202, x0x220, 2xx220, x2x230

#69

Original Songs / Re: What's Wrong With You?

Last post by Ted - May 06, 2024, 10:39:30 PM

I agree , it has a bit of Devo vibe to it ..

Better clarify: Devoto, as in Howard Devoto. Not DEVO.

The vocal approach especially.

#70

Original Songs / Re: What's Wrong With You?

Last post by godinqc - May 06, 2024, 07:06:17 PM

I agree , it has a bit of Devo vibe to it .. great guitar work .. great track..