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Title: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Greeny on April 22, 2024, 09:10:59 AM
Me doing my thing with a MiM Strat (the main riff needed some real low-end twang), Ibanez bass, and GB drums. No keys, and my Danelectro billionnaire trem pedal on quite a fast wobble for the main guitar part. All recorded and mixed on the MBR. I recorded this a while back but it's become a personal fave for some reason. It was a sleeper album track for a long time.

The red kite reference is about birds of prey that have taken over certain parts of the UK (especially in Bruno's neck of the woods). They are bloody huge and flock like seagulls.

Bear in mind that no-one here gets out alive
red kites fly like blood cells in the sun
in the human zoo
absorbing all your blue

through my skin and then you'll be
in every cell of me
through my skin and then you'll be
in every cell of me

boats with ragged sails that pass through history
broadsides from the demons in our heads
in the human zoo
absorbing all your blue

through my skin and then you'll be
in every cell of me
through my skin and then you'll be
in every cell of me

In the human zoo
absorbing all your blue...


Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: BerryPatch on April 22, 2024, 09:18:18 AM
Wicked job on those guitars here Tim. The main riff kinda reminds me of a Guided By Voices song with razor sharp words to go along with it. The solo is great too, awesome bluesy licks! Excellent song
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Trist on April 22, 2024, 10:18:44 AM
excellent production on this, sounds so loud and rocking, the guitars ring through the mix real well with a great sound and groove, vocals are class, liked the dark poetic lyrics, its a cool rock song with a good rhythm and style througout.  wish was longer
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 22, 2024, 02:02:17 PM
Cool song, Tim. Some fantastic lyrical lines in there and that guitar work sounds great. As always excellent vocals and stellar production.
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Pete C on April 22, 2024, 02:37:43 PM
lovely guitars and a great bass line holding it up. all in all a cracker !

Pete
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: ODH on April 22, 2024, 02:48:21 PM
Power and control, with grit to taste. Nice one, Tim
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: chapperz66 on April 23, 2024, 03:04:40 AM
Great song.  The mix has real punch yet clarity.  I can see why this is a personal favourite.

Red kite numbers appear pretty high in my neck of the woods too.  The local crow and magpie residents don't appear too keen.  The crows in particular like to harry them away.  It's a bit like a battle of Britain dogfight on occasion.
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: kenny mac on April 23, 2024, 07:36:57 AM
This is excellent  ,its got a 60s vibe to it.
Love the guitar effects ,great solo.
Lyrics are top notch as we'll topped of with a crystal clear vocal.
Nice one.
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Blooby on April 23, 2024, 08:06:42 AM

You are proof-positive that you don't need anything beyond an MBR to record stellar music. The tremolo was a great choice. Perfect solo for this tune, and I always love your bass playing.

Blooby

Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: tolga on April 23, 2024, 01:09:40 PM
it is always a pleasure to listen Greeny's work. great listen.
Tolga
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: StephenM on April 23, 2024, 04:16:55 PM
it may take me days to get to the lyrics in this beauty of a tune!  My gosh, I am absolutely lost in those guitar riffs and sounds... and just that damn great Greeny way of doin it.

I don't know what you do but you should do it great.

then that lead comes in... man I am slain... absolutely crushed... not even the Tragically Hip could rock like this and still make it sound like the corner nun will adore it... righteous man... this is righteous..
see you know what you are doing... wow.
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: maxit on April 24, 2024, 05:28:34 AM
That little guitar solo in between is a gem! Wonderful song (wonderful as usual, if I understand your doubts lol)
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: hardlock on April 25, 2024, 01:46:17 AM
Great Rocker! Dig the melodies over the power backing. Great contrast but blends perfectly! Great listen! 8)
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Mike_S on April 25, 2024, 04:23:03 PM
Greeny Monday... but only getting to this now... but very glad I did. This just sets off like a train and keeps going. Love the wobbly effect on the guitar and yes you can't beat a strat for that great low end twang... nothing like it :) Super stuff... downloading for my SC collection... thank you

Mike
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: Ted on May 13, 2024, 02:51:49 AM
A crazy contrast between the joyful music and the sense in the lyrics of confinement and irresistible malevolent infusion. The song begins with warning: Do not be deceived by the catchy cheerful music: Memento mori... Memento Morrison.

As others have said: The vibrato! The bass! The solo! The production!

Perhaps the contrast between the music is not ironic, but serves a purpose. Your inner struggle – the demons in your head, the relentless attack from nature – is finite and futile. Embrace it.
Title: Re: 'In Every Cell of Me' - Greeny Monday Original
Post by: SE on May 17, 2024, 04:37:48 PM
Just loving the the vocal, but the guitar with the tremolo is killer, loved the listen!