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Title: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: ODH on April 12, 2024, 09:47:24 AM
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The two chords are Am and D. 

Here we have GarageBand drummer, percussionist and loops, as well as bass and a sort of xylophone keyboard part. Two ukulele tracks and these hasty lyrics...

Before, During and After

(Chorus)
Before, during, after
Happy ever after

It seems important when it's coming right at ya
But it don't mean a thing
A hundred years from now we'll all be long gone
And no more song to sing

(Ch)

Because the world was fine before you got here
And when you're gone it's good
So take a minute and think what's important
'Cause if you don't you should

(Ch)

And when the human extinction is over
D'you think the world will stop?
No
Nature will reclaim all it lost to the humans
Then paradise for ever
And ever

(Ch)

it's the biscuits
Yeah it's the biscuits
And it's the biscuits
That make it worthwhile


Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: StephenM on April 12, 2024, 10:25:46 AM
reminds me of Darren Gibbons stuff.... and yes it is all you Nick.

this sounds great.  lots of color in this, so much fun... so much joyous energy.  the music makes my feet dance.. the uke makes my arms twirl.  The song makes we swirl!  I swirl. 

and ever and ever and ever and ever.... twirl.... swirl...

happy ever after.  oh yes... but that little voice out at the end wrecked me

the snare hits are amazing... drums sound great.  splashing!
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original - added lyric
Post by: ODH on April 13, 2024, 09:26:00 AM
Thank you Stephen.

I've added some more information and lyrics
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: Zoltan on April 13, 2024, 01:02:19 PM
Oh no... You spoiled it by telling the chords!

Lately i've been thinking about you. I've been thinking about a lot of youthful noise. I even heard a song i was now familiar with after hearing your cover. It was something from the 90s and the movie might have been American Pie 2.

So what else? Yeah, i'm liking this. It's sunny so it did in fact remind me of Darren. You're doing a lot of work for selling the Uke to the masses. Must resist.
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: SE on April 13, 2024, 03:23:21 PM
Yes just lots to like the vocal and precession are just cool.
The performance is just excellent enjoyed it lots!
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: godinqc on April 13, 2024, 03:59:23 PM
Great 2 chords song .. I liked the ukulele sound.. excellent performance.
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: hardlock on April 13, 2024, 06:41:09 PM
Nice one! Love the contrast between vocals/instruments. Very enjoyable listen! 8)
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: Ron D Bowes on April 14, 2024, 05:23:21 AM
Yes I enjoyed the composition of the song and the deft little stop on the word "stop". Nicely done.
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: Greeny on April 15, 2024, 04:16:23 AM
Just shows how you can get some very cool variation between verse and chorus with the same two chords. In fact, nobody would even notice / think about it without the context of the fest. It's a fine piece of work. Star of the show for me is that uke in the left ear - really has a great character. It does feel like one of those 90's Smashmouth style songs. Very cool, very catchy, very you!
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: SE on April 17, 2024, 04:50:14 PM
I'm the looper man just now but you so way better, cool stuff!
Title: Re: Before, During and After (Unspoiled Wilderness) - 2 chord original
Post by: Ted on April 24, 2024, 05:47:29 AM
Quirky as hell!

Well done. I think the best two-chord songs are the ones where you don't notice that it's two chords. I can't say for sure, because spoilers, but I don't think I would have noticed.

I do love the theme of "Nature will reclaim all it lost to the humans." It's something I've been thinking about for a long time. Since 1981 I've had a big coffee-table book called "After Man" by Dougal Dixon (https://amzn.to/3QjkEep). The book forces you to think about all of the species that we can/may/will take down with us when/if we go extinct. The species may be gone, but the niches will still be there, and nature will fill those new niches with new, wonderful species that we can only imagine – and Dixon does a lot of imagining.

Love the song.