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Title: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 16, 2022, 04:31:40 PM
A new original composition, words and music by Rene A.
We need as much love, and hope, and peace in our troubled world today!!!!!
Hope you like this song!
Rene

https://youtu.be/rx9fVftUBEw
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: hardlock on April 16, 2022, 07:16:02 PM
Very nice song and performance! The guitar chord changes are reminiscent of some of the Beatles songs which I always really liked.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Zoltan on April 16, 2022, 10:13:39 PM
Wonderful song! Your vocals are immaculate and the gently played acoustic guitar sounds lovely.

As for the songwriting. The song sounds like a classic already :) The lyrics are positive and easy to relate to.

As an aside. It looks like you're one of those players whose at ease with fingerpicking and also using the fingers like you'd have plectrum at hand.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 16, 2022, 11:01:14 PM
Quote from: hardlock on April 16, 2022, 07:16:02 PMVery nice song and performance! The guitar chord changes are reminiscent of some of the Beatles songs which I always really liked.
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Hi hardlock,
Thanks for the great comments.  I love the Beatles, and grew up with all their songs, and that might be the reason for my sound.
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 16, 2022, 11:06:34 PM
Quote from: Zoltan on April 16, 2022, 10:13:39 PMWonderful song! Your vocals are immaculate and the gently played acoustic guitar sounds lovely.
As for the songwriting. The song sounds like a classic already :) The lyrics are positive and easy to relate to.
As an aside. It looks like you're one of those players whose at ease with fingerpicking and also using the fingers like you'd have plectrum at hand.
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Hi Zoltan,  Your comments are so much loved, and I am truly humbled.  You are absolutely correct, I love to play guitar with just my fingers, no picks.  For the last 10 years, I have been trying to improve on fingerstyle guitar music, and actually reading and playing the melody of the song, and guitar soloing by using scales and arpeggios.  Thanks for the wonderful feedback!!!
Respectfully,
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: ODH on April 17, 2022, 01:14:02 AM
Lot of passion - and ability - in your performance. Enjoyed that.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Nelson on April 17, 2022, 04:04:47 PM
A lovely sentiment and another beautiful performance.
I too hear the Beattle influence and a bit Mr. Bojangles, too.

Nicely done, Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 17, 2022, 10:00:45 PM
Quote from: ODH on April 17, 2022, 01:14:02 AMLot of passion - and ability - in your performance. Enjoyed that.

Hi ODH,
Love your comments!  I am truly humbled by your kind words.
Thank you so much!!!
rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 17, 2022, 10:03:58 PM
Quote from: Nelson on April 17, 2022, 04:04:47 PMA lovely sentiment and another beautiful performance.
I too hear the Beattle influence and a bit Mr. Bojangles, too.
Nicely done, Rene
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Hi Nelson,
Thanks for the wonderful comments.  I truly am influenced by the Beatles, and a bit of Bojangles, music of the 60's and 70's I love!!!
Much appreciation to you and your feedback.
Respectfully,
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Ella on April 18, 2022, 02:01:06 AM
Beautiful song! You sing and play guitar so well and you have very warm and nice voice.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 18, 2022, 10:19:20 AM
Quote from: Ella on April 18, 2022, 02:01:06 AMBeautiful song! You sing and play guitar so well and you have very warm and nice voice.

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Hi Ella,
Thank you for your very kind words!!!
I love your comments.
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: StephenM on April 18, 2022, 01:17:01 PM
M diggin the way you say the word "home"... such conviction!

I like different accents and you have an interesting sound.  those chords the way you move around them are so good to my ears! 
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Ray Brookes on April 18, 2022, 02:11:10 PM
Very nice song and performed beautifully.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Blooby on April 18, 2022, 08:45:12 PM

Wowza, that was special. You have a stellar voice and an organic style of accompaniment. Love the man cave as well. Lordy, that acoustic records well. Was that a mic or direct?

Great post.

Blooby
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Greeny on April 19, 2022, 03:20:45 AM
Beautiful chord changes and playing, and your voice has such a great timbre. This is a beautiful song - pure class. And that is such a gorgeous guitar!
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Farrell Jackson on April 19, 2022, 07:36:05 AM
Great songwriting and your performances are over the top Rene! I like the chords you have chosen. It's a wonderful song!
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 10:56:48 AM
Quote from: StephenM on April 18, 2022, 01:17:01 PMM diggin the way you say the word "home"... such conviction!
I like different accents and you have an interesting sound.  those chords the way you move around them are so good to my ears! 
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Love your comment Stephen!
Love that you noticed the chords, as well.
You are truly a talented musician!!!
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 10:58:01 AM
Quote from: Ray Brookes on April 18, 2022, 02:11:10 PMVery nice song and performed beautifully.
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Hi Ray,
It is always a pleasure hearing from you, and your wonderful comments.
Glad to be here, in the midst of greatness!
Thanks for your support and inspiration.
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 11:00:04 AM
Quote from: Blooby on April 18, 2022, 08:45:12 PMWowza, that was special. You have a stellar voice and an organic style of accompaniment. Love the man cave as well. Lordy, that acoustic records well. Was that a mic or direct?
Great post.
Blooby

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Hi Blooby, Guitar was recorded using the mic, SM-58.  Thanks for your very kind and humbling comments.
I really appreciate your liking the man cave and the recording!!!
Respectfully,
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 11:01:45 AM
Quote from: Greeny on April 19, 2022, 03:20:45 AMBeautiful chord changes and playing, and your voice has such a great timbre. This is a beautiful song - pure class. And that is such a gorgeous guitar!
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Hi Greeny,
Love that you noticed the chord changes.
Thanks for your excellent comments, specially on my voice and my guitar.
You are so much appreciated!!!
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 11:17:59 AM
Quote from: Farrell Jackson on April 19, 2022, 07:36:05 AMGreat songwriting and your performances are over the top Rene! I like the chords you have chosen. It's a wonderful song!
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Hi Farrell,
Thanks for your outstanding comments on songwriting and actual execution, very humbling and I really appreciate it!  Coming from you Farrell, I am so happy and inspired!
Respectfully,
Rene
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Blooby on May 01, 2022, 04:35:02 PM
Quote from: Rene Asologuitar on April 19, 2022, 11:00:04 AM********************
Hi Blooby, Guitar was recorded using the mic, SM-58. 

I haven't recorded an acoustic with a 57 or 58 in decades. I've been futzing with large and small paired condenser mics so long that I've forgotten what a great sound you can get with a 57 or 58. It's a very specific thing they do which is very cool. Will experiment in the weeks to come. Thanks.

Blooby
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: WarpCanada on May 01, 2022, 08:41:13 PM
Great vocals and wonderful guitar work.
Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on May 02, 2022, 08:39:39 AM

I haven't recorded an acoustic with a 57 or 58 in decades. I've been futzing with large and small paired condenser mics so long that I've forgotten what a great sound you can get with a 57 or 58. It's a very specific thing they do which is very cool. Will experiment in the weeks to come. Thanks.
Blooby
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Good luck Blooby.
And thanks for the excellent feedback.
Rene


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Title: Re: Come With Me
Post by: Rene Asologuitar on May 02, 2022, 08:40:32 AM
Quote from: WarpCanada on May 01, 2022, 08:41:13 PMGreat vocals and wonderful guitar work.
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Hi WC,
You are so much appreciated.
Love your comments.
Respectfully,
Rene