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Title: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on September 07, 2017, 10:38:11 AM
I had intended this one to be a wee short one for the under 2 minute fest but got carried away.

It is what it is.

I would climb a mountain if you asked me to
I'd do anything for you
I would take a bullet that was meant for you
Baby please don't go
Baby please don't go
Away
I will dedicate my life to you
I'd never let you in harms way
If you don't feel safe I will rescue you
Baby please don't go
Baby please don't go
Away
There ain't no one else like you
No one can touch you
And when you're standing by my side
It fills my heart
With pride
I'd dance with you until I dropped
And pray the music never stopped
So save the last waltz for me
Baby please don't go
Baby please don't go
Away
Baby Please Don't Go Away
W/M
By
Oldrottenhead
Jasmine electro acoustic
Woolies Strat
Juno Di
Garageband Drums
and
Vocals
by
Oldrottenhead
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Groundy on September 07, 2017, 12:07:43 PM
Sounds great James,
Love the acoustic guitar.
Well done.
Reminds me of Jimmy Nail, style.
Alex
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Rolow on September 07, 2017, 02:01:38 PM
Nice one James!

I like the well recorded acoustic rhythm guitar.

Very good lyrics, tells a story.


Ron
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Redler on September 07, 2017, 10:51:37 PM
Fine lyrics and catchy melody! Well done, James!

Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Johnny Robbo on September 08, 2017, 08:49:51 AM
Quote from: Groundy on September 07, 2017, 12:07:43 PMSounds great James,
Love the acoustic guitar.
Well done.
Reminds me of Jimmy Nail, style.
Alex

Was just going to say the same. Bravo, mate!
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: The Gobi Desert Canoe Club on September 10, 2017, 01:05:41 PM
Glad you didn't cut it short Jim, really liked this one.   Willie
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Mike_S on September 13, 2017, 02:56:55 PM
Yes well worth working this one up a bit. That's my worry if I try an under 2min song, think i am bound to keep going till i fell its done!!

This is great, lovely vibe kinda carries you along gently, sounds like you got great value for money for that Woolies strat.

Mike
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on November 24, 2017, 05:13:39 PM
QuoteReminds me of Jimmy Nail, style.
bugger was gong for a paddy mcaloon vibe, but hey he did write most of mr nails hits. ya bassass lol.
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on November 28, 2017, 05:55:18 AM
now on spotify https://open.spotify.com/album/0Noi56MVUCc1C0jD3qJJEB
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: kenny mac on November 29, 2017, 03:11:54 AM
Probably my favourite composition from you mate,this is class.
Is that your 1st solo?
getting a Paulo nutini vibe and proclaimers all into one.
Brilliant.
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Johnny Robbo on November 29, 2017, 04:00:19 AM
Back again... lovely to hear this one again!
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Hook on November 29, 2017, 05:22:15 PM
I dig my brother.
Rock on!
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Oldrottenhead on January 20, 2018, 01:40:44 PM
now on spotify https://open.spotify.com/track/6YWsc1omEE1XHaEdxFfugF (https://open.spotify.com/track/6YWsc1omEE1XHaEdxFfugF)
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: pjd1 on January 20, 2018, 01:53:53 PM
Cool song hope it does well for you on spotify ORH brilliant mate 
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Ronniejm on January 21, 2018, 05:30:42 PM
Yep, first thought was Paolo Nutini would like to do this song, both the rthymn guitar and in some parts the vocals, gave me the Nutini vibe.

I'm loving the sound of the strummed acoustic, I can never strum right, which hit home to me when I tried to cover "Candy"

You've got it down to a T.

Great work

Cheers
Ronnie
Title: Re: Baby Please Don't Go Away by Oldrottenhead
Post by: Groundy on January 21, 2018, 11:33:08 PM
Back for more...
I was going to say you have Nailed it, but I won't. ;D
Well done Pal.

Alex.
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