waynesan76
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« on: March 09, 2008, 07:54:34 pm » |
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Hello all,
I just wrote this little tune and I'm struggling with the lead guitar and vocals. I've been exclusively playing the blues for a while now, and that may be my achilles' heel here. I welcome anyone to try to add some life to it. I especially like "oldrottenhead"'s lyrics, so if you see this please give it a shot (I know you're probably busy learning about your new SR-16). Anyhow, here it is:
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« Reply #1 on: March 10, 2008, 09:21:38 am » |
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i'll take a crack at the lead,if you like- when ohr gets back from visiting donald duck- |
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« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2008, 12:23:27 pm » |
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Great instrumental. Very calming and smooth with a solid structure. This has potential to become a very cool song. |
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waynesan76
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« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2008, 08:48:44 pm » |
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Thanks guys! I tried messing around with a lead guitar part, but no matter where I played it seemed to be off-key. I'm only farmiliar with the major, minor, and blues scales, so I gave a shot at it with the maj scale at the root of c. I thought that would work, but...nope. I'm seriously lacking in theory! Guess I should've taken those lessons many years ago as my good friend suggested.  |
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« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2008, 09:43:04 am » |
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just back from purgatory aka eurodisney. should be renamed the eastern bloc cause you have to queue for everything. i'll take a crack at the lead,if you like- when ohr gets back from visiting donald duck- i do quite a good donald duck, might even do a donald duck lyric for this, will probably be about queuing and overpriced reformmed meat products, 8euros for a hot dog wi about 5% meat content (only if you dropped it in a puddle tho). am off to put this in ma mbr , nice stuff waynesan76 will see if i can come up wi something. |
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![[image]](http://songcrafters.org/community/Images/Signature/tumbleweed.gif) whit goes oan in ma heid |
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« Reply #5 on: March 12, 2008, 12:31:48 pm » |
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well hear it is a rant inspired by the disney experience, and includes a punch up with a very vocal donald duck at the end.
is now called "an a don't give a donald (duck)" which is rhyming slang for i dont give a ####.
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« Reply #6 on: March 12, 2008, 02:06:58 pm » |
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LMAO
Alright Jimmy
I'm gonna give a go i'm
Ron |
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« Reply #7 on: March 12, 2008, 02:10:39 pm » |
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do do ron ron, do do ron ron.
im off to the pub for some liquid inspiration and to completely dedisney myself, aahhh reality isn't it great. |
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« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2008, 04:53:40 pm » |
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my apologies to waynesan76-
but this was to fun to resist-lost my slide-so i had to make due with a shot glass(unfilled, unfortunately)-Do they got cowboys in Scotland?
Ron
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waynesan76
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« Reply #9 on: March 12, 2008, 10:41:25 pm » |
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No apologies required here! That was friggin hilarious! I think some fitting titles would be "Disgruntled at Disney" or "Rat Rage". I had a vision of ORH sacking a Mickey Mouse mascot on the side of a highway. Hilarious indeed! The laughs were well worth the time it took me to record that very basic song. Nice slide work Ron! |
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« Reply #10 on: March 13, 2008, 04:04:37 am » |
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braw slide ron, will post this at nevermet site with lyrics if ok with waynesan76 |
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« Reply #11 on: March 13, 2008, 08:45:51 am » |
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You have my blessing ORH, go ahead and post away. Those lyrics are classic! I haven't laughed that hard in a while. |
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« Reply #12 on: March 13, 2008, 10:32:35 am » |
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thats it up hope i credited all involved properly if you guys want any adjustments to them let me know and i'll make the changes. here is the link with lyrics etc enjoy. http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6358350 |
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« Reply #13 on: August 20, 2009, 12:13:33 pm » |
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Hey.......
This is Ducking Awesome!
Well Done All!
Love the mood of this!
The Scottish Accent sets it of very Nicely!!!!
Peace
T(Osckilo) |
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« Reply #14 on: August 20, 2009, 12:51:39 pm » |
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i'll take a crack at the lead,if you like- when ohr gets back from visiting donald duck-
lmao! |
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