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Author Topic: any musicians, can you make my song "too near the sun" sound better  (Read 2692 times)
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« on: January 13, 2008, 06:27:28 AM »

hi ,
i've been writing songs for years but sadly i cant play guitar or keyboards for toffee, but hey that doesn't stop me, i think my lyric writing and flat voice compensate for my poor musical abilities.
so lets cut to the chase. i have a song that i have stripped back to just the basic backing track and vocal, you can hear the finished song in all it's glory here. its called too near the sun.
www.soundclick.com/thebunkbeds

but below i'm going to post the basic track for any decent musician to play over the top and perhaps enhance the song. feel free to do what you want with it, and if i really like it i will replace my version with the enhanced version at my site www.soundclick.com/thebunkbeds
the song is called too near the sun
thanks and have fun with it.

* 114. too near the sun. lite mix..MP3 (3173.88 KB - downloaded 72 times.)
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« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2008, 07:01:56 AM »

Sounds very very nice. Very inspiring, I'm sure you'll get a lot of good musical ideas added on this one.
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« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2008, 03:55:30 PM »

Ok, ORH, here are my additions to "too near the sun", all i have added are a wee mellow lead guitar, and some backing vox.
hope you enjoy what i have dood with it.

* Too Near The Sun- ORH & 13STARZ+.mp3 (2128.47 KB - downloaded 137 times.)
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« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2008, 04:05:42 PM »

hehe this is great fun, not what i expected at all yer no a bad singer  by the way.
how long did it take to tune the guitar to my wavelength.
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« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2008, 04:10:20 PM »

HAHA, ye were pretty much in tune anyway.
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« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2008, 04:12:32 PM »

tuned to the moon



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« Reply #6 on: January 13, 2008, 04:57:16 PM »

Ok, ORH, here are my additions to "too near the sun", all i have added are a wee mellow lead guitar, and some backing vox.
hope you enjoy what i have dood with it.

Very nice! This is a great song, tied up with This is your story in my favorite list by The Bunkbeds.
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« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2008, 06:32:23 PM »

Well, finally got courage and jammed a bit with this one. Added two tracks of guitar, one rhythm and one solo. I did it over the original version and not the 13STARZ+ one because I think his version is already finished.

Hope you enjoy, I didn't add to much sounds so that other people can continue. Some strings would sound fine, I think.

Great song, you have a great talent.

* Too Near the Sun.MP3 (3235.92 KB - downloaded 36 times.)
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« Reply #8 on: January 24, 2008, 06:36:48 PM »

cool reminds me of chris isaac circa blue hotel love the wee mad solo.
cheers.
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« Reply #9 on: January 24, 2008, 06:49:39 PM »

cool reminds me of chris isaac circa blue hotel love the wee mad solo.
cheers.

Yes, me too! Next time I will try to be more original.  Cheesy
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« Reply #10 on: January 24, 2008, 07:00:07 PM »

it wasnt a criticism, but could you post just your parts you added, cos i want to mix it in to my  finished song, the one thats posted at my soundclick site.
you can hear my final mix at the link below, but if you post the parts you did, i would like too try and add them to that, same goes for 13starz+


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5993760
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« Reply #11 on: January 30, 2008, 11:17:16 AM »

it wasnt a criticism, but could you post just your parts you added, cos i want to mix it in to my  finished song, the one thats posted at my soundclick site.
you can hear my final mix at the link below, but if you post the parts you did, i would like too try and add them to that, same goes for 13starz+


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=5993760

Here it is, hope it is useful. If you want I can put the whole multitrack file.

* Too near the sun - guitars only.MP3 (3282.86 KB - downloaded 30 times.)
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« Reply #12 on: January 30, 2008, 12:51:05 PM »

hi i imported admins guitar into cubase, made a copy of it . putting same guitar track on two seperate tracks 1 panned to full left the other panned to full left. then individually i went mad on the reverb and delay for these tracks, doing each track with different effects to try and make em sound like two different guitars. then i imported my own final mix of too near the sun into the pot, there was no problem syncing everything started from same point. final mix is a bit muggy but at a later point i would like to import guitar track to my microbr but am not sure if syncing may be an issue there.

anyway here it is.

* 114. too near the sun plus admin.mp3 (3356 KB - downloaded 42 times.)
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« Reply #13 on: January 30, 2008, 01:01:33 PM »

Very cool song and your mix sounds great. The keyboard sounds great too!

What keyboard is it?

I took the liberty to add the mini mp3 player to your post, hope you don't mind. From now try to use it.

Great work oldrottenhead!
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« Reply #14 on: January 30, 2008, 01:05:39 PM »

 keyboard is a bottom of the range casio. he he ctk-496 if that means anything to anyone lmfao.
thanks for the comments hope i didnt mix your guitar too far back in the mix. speakers on my pc are crap, much prefer mixing from the micro with my powered speakers.
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