waynesan76
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« on: February 11, 2008, 01:37:22 AM » |
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Please let me know if you like it. I created all the music for this song, but the drums are on a machine  |
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« Last Edit: February 11, 2008, 04:36:56 PM by admin »
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Pedro
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« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2008, 04:48:22 PM » |
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Groovie guitar riff!
The recording: The first thing I notice is that it has a good low end but lacks some mids and highs. You should put some more rhythm guitar, the chord riff is very cool, I would like to hear it louder.
Also, your vocals could use a little compression. Do some double vocals to make them stand up in the song.
The song: Its pretty groovie, I like the guitars. I would say the structure is very solid. You should work on your singing, in the high notes you are a bit out of tune.
It's pretty good for your first original song! Keep it up and thanks a lot for sharing. |
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waynesan76
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« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2008, 09:55:06 PM » |
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Thanks bro! Yeah, I've been suffering from a cold for over a month now, so the vocals probably wont get any better anytime soon. Maybe I'll hire a singer. I was working on a version of "before you accuse me" and my 4 year old daughter unexpectedly chimed in on the chorus one day. Maybe I can enlist her talents! Thanks for the tips, I'll give it another shot next Sunday. |
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Pedro
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« Reply #3 on: February 12, 2008, 07:50:42 AM » |
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That would be awesome! |
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beleg
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« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2008, 01:29:36 PM » |
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cool riff, did you ever re-record? |
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Bigsky
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« Reply #5 on: August 12, 2008, 03:30:16 PM » |
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Very cool, I like the song |
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