This is pretty good, you are not a terrible guitar player. This song is just asking for a lead guitar! Are the drums sound you playing your electronic kit? What kit is it?
About the recording: It seems like you have just recorded everything without mixing, am I right? Things you could do to make it sound better: Put some more volume (much more) on the guitar and bass. You could double the rhythm guitar and pan the tracks to opposite spacial positions, for example, track 1 rhyhtm track fully left, track 2 (the same rhythm as 1) fully right. But I guess for your first recording it is not bad.
I suggest you keep praticing recording stuff and mess around with all the buttons and knobs.
You are pretty good on drums! I would like to play as you, I'm just learning now, bought myself a used Pearl Rhythm Traveler kit. It's a bit hard...
